Do you like this poem?

Please listen to these words:

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without a care in my mind,
I want to feel empty again,
I want to go numb,
I want to go back,

I want to go back to my deep,
my deep sleep,
you must not weep,
for I am dead and I must sleep,

I want to be dead,
I want nothing,
just to be,

It sounds like something that would go well with heavy metal music. I like

lol ok nice I am writing music

Sounds creepy but keep on keeping on. You may be a star one day

The darkened silence,
Your heart beats the music,
A wondering thought,
Your head lying on my chest,
A thought of death long past,
The depravation gone,
The winds last song,
The details I noticed,
Long unsought,
The love I show,
The strongest blow,
An anointed uncertainty,
Lost to your kiss.

I think it was very good and also ithink if you keep going you will go somewhere