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Another poem, any insight?

Asked by myzarri about 1 year ago, 8 answers.

Load the miracle
Say my good byes
Bite down on the barrel
Slowly shut my eyes
Say my prayers
Pull the trigger
Hear the bang
Hear nothing at all
Wake up
People around me
Crying, whispering
Aknowladging me
Im still here
And I still cant win.
Imprisoned...

by the begining
Longing for the end

Answered by piker187 on May 09, 2008, 11:29AM
987 answers

you rock girl

Answered by funadvice on May 09, 2008, 11:58AM
53738 answers

wow. THat's deep. YOu rock.

Answered by shawtygirl1115 on May 09, 2008, 12:00PM
97 answers

OMG!! I LUVE IT!!! what ELSE DO UHAVE?!?!?!

Answered by falloutboylover on May 09, 2008, 12:11PM

wow is all I can say!

Answered by luvgerard on May 09, 2008, 12:47PM
154 answers

WOWOWOWOWOWOWOW your AWESOME

Answered by nothingness on May 09, 2008, 01:02PM
112 answers

an amazingly supirior to any other liturature piece I have heard in long period of time! Overall 10/10!

DO NOT SUCCUM TO THE APPRESSION OF EMOTION!!!

xoxox

Answered by venus1992 on May 09, 2008, 01:57PM
11 answers

I like it a lot its reallt deep but it makes sense, your an AWESOME writer :]

Answered by funadvice on May 09, 2008, 04:42PM
53738 answers

plesa, send me more!!! I already wrote a poem like it.

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