Another poem...

In My Mind
By: Me

In my mind I see you
you with all your looks and style
In my mind I see me
me with all my secrets
Bang! Where did you go?
you with all your answers
Poof! Where did I go?
me with all my questions
In my mind I see nothing
nothing...

with all its darkness
In my mind I see no one
no one with but their curiosity
Bang! There you are
you with all your looks and style
Poof! There I am
me with all my secrets
In my mind I see you
you with all your answers
In my mind I see me
me with all my questions

nicely wriiten...

oh me gooord! I love this one to!! what inspired you?? I write a bit too

a little too repetitive, and I don't like the words you used in my mind I just imagined them as kind of whiney in my head.
the idea was good though