Another poem

I don't have a name for this. If you don't have something nice to say about my poetry, don't put it on here.

When you're with your friends, you act like I'm not around.
When I call, you say you never hear a sound.
Apparenly my love wasn't...

enough,
To get through your armor, thick and tough.
My heart began to grow a heavy shield,
Uncovering secrets and my power revealed.
The next time you look into my eyes, you won't see grey,
Instead you will see what you did to me that day.

Your really good! try to rhyme every other line in a poem, instead of every line, it'll flow better, but dont change this poem! I like it! lol.

OMG!!!
thats like really good
I love it
you have a true talent for poetry

wow!!! girl you are so good at poetry, how long did it take you 2 write this???

here are my title suggestions:
my feelings
the rupture
love of no love
through the eyes and out the heart

I think it is great...Thanks for sharing.

that really good. Like it.

I absolutely love it!

What happened?

Girl, that is so excellent! I have a suggestion for a title:
Through the Eyes of a Torn Soul

let me know what yoy think.