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A song i wrote?

no on will ever see the side reflected Asked by purplesharpie98795 8 months ago, 6 answers.

It's called Seconds
V1
Do you know how I feel?
You never took the time to get to know me
Every time I speak you turn around
And talk to someone else
I can't deal
With this

Chorus
Will you just shut up for one second!
And let me say what I...

have to
The seconds are ticking by
I open my mouth and you just keep chatting away
The seconds seem longer then they should
So I'll just walk away

V2
I start a sentence
And you interrupt
Don't you ever shut your mouth?
Maybe you should start
I can't speak my mind!
Because you won't let me say a single word!
(Chorus)

Ending
Just please shut up
Before I kill you!

Do you like it?

THANK YOU!

Cookie! :) Answered by hmore_2006 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:23PM
13 answers

someone could steal this
never post unpromoted lyrics online.
it should rhyme too...
not good. sorry

HAPPY TO BE ALIVE Answered by littlecutie on Mar 16, 2009, 06:24PM
83 answers

not all that much sorry, it needs a little rhyming it doesn't sound all that great
sorry...

idk? haha Answered by bubbles0990 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:26PM
577 answers

I actually did like it! I do agree that it needs some more work but this is on it's way to a really good song!

Me ( black hoody on) and my brother ( guy with the white on) Answered by hedgecortha on Mar 16, 2009, 06:26PM
163 answers

I think it good dont listen to them they just mad cause they cant sing keep writing more

Answered by ksuarezbonet on Mar 16, 2009, 06:32PM
23 answers

thats true you should never put unpromoted lyrics online.

~Blue rose~ Answered by desigurl94 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:38PM
51 answers

well I wouldnt say its bad I mean just needs sum work
and a lil ryhming
another thing you shouldnt post it because people could steal your hard work

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