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A song i wrote?

Asked by purplesharpie98795 8 months ago, 6 answers.

It's called Seconds
V1
Do you know how I feel?
You never took the time to get to know me
Every time I speak you turn around
And talk to someone else
I can't deal
With this

Chorus
Will you just shut up for one second!
And let me say what I...

have to
The seconds are ticking by
I open my mouth and you just keep chatting away
The seconds seem longer then they should
So I'll just walk away

V2
I start a sentence
And you interrupt
Don't you ever shut your mouth?
Maybe you should start
I can't speak my mind!
Because you won't let me say a single word!
(Chorus)

Ending
Just please shut up
Before I kill you!

Do you like it?

THANK YOU!

Answered by hmore_2006 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:23PM
13 answers

someone could steal this
never post unpromoted lyrics online.
it should rhyme too...
not good. sorry

Answered by littlecutie on Mar 16, 2009, 06:24PM
83 answers

not all that much sorry, it needs a little rhyming it doesn't sound all that great
sorry...

Answered by bubbles0990 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:26PM
577 answers

I actually did like it! I do agree that it needs some more work but this is on it's way to a really good song!

Answered by hedgecortha on Mar 16, 2009, 06:26PM
163 answers

I think it good dont listen to them they just mad cause they cant sing keep writing more

Answered by ksuarezbonet on Mar 16, 2009, 06:32PM
23 answers

thats true you should never put unpromoted lyrics online.

Answered by desigurl94 on Mar 16, 2009, 06:38PM
51 answers

well I wouldnt say its bad I mean just needs sum work
and a lil ryhming
another thing you shouldnt post it because people could steal your hard work

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