A poem i wrote about celebrities

Please let me know what you think.

CELEBRITY

So desperate
So eager
just wanting
to be her.
She's a b*tch
She's a slut
So why do you
give a f*ck -
what she does
what she wears?
You'll continue
to stare
at the rich girl
wearing...

heels,
unaware
how she feels.
All the lights
in her face
capturing moments
of disgrace.
Not knowing
whats's inside.
Not caring
that she cries.
No idea
that it's true

All she wants

is to be you.

Ohhh tres bien!

It's a good poem I like it, but I don't agree with the message...

very good, only it reminded me of your other one too much. it seems like your shooting for a specific rhythm rather than focusing on your subject. its very enjoyable though, but you should make all your work differant as possible. make each one completely unique if you can. (just my opinion) other than that your an amazing writer

Thats actually a really truthful poem well dun!

I like it but I don't think it can be directed at all celebrites because some are not like that, but none the less it's a great poem.

Y'know, I originally wrote it without a title or specific target - I was going to make it about the 'popular' girl at school that people gossip about but thought it was a bit lame and immature to do that. I know it's not exactly a true msg but it's the best a could do for what it is