Do you like my poem?

this poem reminds me of someone special that will always have a place in my heart. I wrote this poem because of my pain wishing it would go away.

threw the hills
threw the tree's
threw the waves of this dreaded sea
I walk alone, as if anyone cares
wishing you were here with me.
day by day, night by night.
I see your face, with out a fright.
every morning I wake up I think about
how I lost your love. its as if you never cared it goes like this
I loved you from the start. you said you loved me to,
but I knew the truth. you really didn't love me you lied.
you acted as if you cared but you really didn't
you wondered how it would be to brake somebodys heart
so you threw that painful dart. I felt it, it was a lot of pain
me finally realizing how you loved my pain.
you loved the sound of my cry
you loved the word goodbye
know that your gone there
is a piece of my world missing
but I have learned to live as if you were
always missing. my heart still aches
my mind wonders why you had the thought
of saying goodbye. my mind wonders all the
time. still wishing you were by my side.

thats a pretty poem

thats a pretty good poem...

Good poem. It really expresses u. I write to and keep poems that I wrote in the past to remind myself how if elt when I wrote it so I don't forget and go through something that could make me feel the same way if I don't want to.

Hey I really likd your poem thats really cute

your poem is great and I hope you feel better as soon as possible , I know that those bruises in your heart are there forever but now is the time to get over your grief and start having fun , because you cant sit crying all day , you should now that life is an ocean wave it has ups and downs and it lands on the shore happily like a heaven on the ground .

Did you mean threw as in throwing or through as in pass through? other than that - yes its good

yeah basically

that's a really good poem good job!

it was... personal... good and involved, the best kind of writing