A better time

I see a memory...a better time...a better place...and younger version of me waves from there...a time without cares...and the worries of society too burden me...a time with no losses and many gains...and time I will never see again...coming and going...

like a fast moving train...away with the tears...a crazy cabous with no one to steer..and love..a life...all gone and disappeared...to see them again would be insanity...although there is nothing I would love more...to see them again..to open that door...to steer the cabous away from these troubled times and back onto that well paved track..but we all know theres no going and..back...you know what they say...theres no time like the present to live in the moment... ^_-

this is an advice site,
post a question, not lyrics.
thats what a social networking site is for...

Um...wow...I just wanted to know what you thought geez man ...chill...its just a poem...alota people do it...it is advice btw..I need advice about what you think...if you don't like it DON'T COMENT not reallt rocket science dude .

uh first of all, 'dude'
you havent written a question.
so write the question before you tell me not to comment
not really rocket science..

Seriously..seriously...I post the thing ..u leave your opinion...so either do that..or stop comenting on it k?
Go rain on someone elses parade...I common..whats your problem? Are you waging a one personm war on poetry...growup man...

I liked it a lot. I like how poems work it's like only you know fully what you meant when you wrote it but others can look at it in different ways. It's like music pretty much but different at the same time. Your really good at writing...keep it up.

a few mistakes in it//it was okay//;