911 poem

this poem is called 911 and I wrote it in 8th grade.

This once was a great city, now I look at families who have lost one another with pity.
Some died because they had no where to go, others died a hero.
Some where stuck inside, others got...

out alive.
Some jumped to escape the flames, but perished just the same
Others waited but no help came.
I look back at that horrible attack, I cant help but cry when I think of all those who died.
Children berried beneath the rubble, when those towers fell and crumbled.
We remember those who died by having a memorial outside.
I hope the people who died enjoy heaven, but most importantly I hope they enjoyed life!!!

Written to remember those who died that day
-911-
by: Jessica Bornemann
so what do ya think??

aww jessie thats so sad! but its really good! you never told me that you could write so well! shows how important I am to u! l jk! have you talked to justice yet???

that poem is so sad but at the same time so beautiful. I love it.

that is so good I am also a writer of poetry when I put my mind to it but you have got talent